okay i finally finished my first drawing of the one's i'm updating. i'v been wondering how i improved over the past year or so. This will be the drawing that really shows how much i've improved.
For those who want to see the original version of this drawing it's right below.
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So i'd like to know how i'm doing so far in the sense of improvement from all of your point of views.
I'd really like a critique if possible from anyone. because with critiques i can know what needs to be changed and so i can further improve.
Raine and Tenma (c) me -->

(oh if any of you are taking part of the contest you can use this to get base colors. Using you own base colors work too since no one colors the same way.
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