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okay i finally finished my first drawing of the one's i'm updating. i'v been wondering how i improved over the past year or so. This will be the drawing that really shows how much i've improved.

For those who want to see the original version of this drawing it's right below.

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So i'd like to know how i'm doing so far in the sense of improvement from all of your point of views.

I'd really like a critique if possible from anyone. because with critiques i can know what needs to be changed and so i can further improve.


Raine and Tenma (c) me --> :iconhyouzan16:

(oh if any of you are taking part of the contest you can use this to get base colors. Using you own base colors work too since no one colors the same way.

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Mood: Adoration ~VampirateFrogHat Dec 9, 2011  Student Writer
This is so cute! ;w; Tenma's clothes looks like something I'd love to wear! =]
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=Hyo-san-desu Dec 9, 2011  Student Digital Artist
thanks, i actually drew those clothe cause i wish i had some like them as well TTwTT lol
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Mood: Joy ~Sury475 Aug 30, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Neko and rabbit
is so classically beautiful! >w<
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=Hyo-san-desu Aug 30, 2011  Student Digital Artist
thanks
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~tinyramennoodlez May 4, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i see a lot of improvement with lighting however i ave to say that i liked the other backround better because it gave an over all joyous tone but still better then anything i can ever do they are both adorable :3
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=Hyo-san-desu May 4, 2011  Student Digital Artist
i was trying to give it a little more like cream tune so it doesn't throw off the colors used on the characters. i kept it all in one tone area.

and thank you
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:iconakinei:
so cute <33
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=Hyo-san-desu Apr 28, 2011  Student Digital Artist
thank you. :iconlachoirplz:
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=Hyo-san-desu Apr 3, 2011  Student Digital Artist
:3
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